Striving to be Better

The following haiku was written in September during the Haiku Challenge. I have once again taken the opportunity to rewrite it and see where it takes me.

The first rewrite uses the last line from the original haiku. The second rewrite is a modified version of the original haiku.

Original:

Words flooding from my
pen. Dreams scattered on paper
line, by line, by line.

Rewrite:

line, by line, by line—
cries from the audience
curtains close

Rewrite:

Ink flowing
creating dreams on paper—
anticipation

~

Have you ever used the last line of a poem or haiku to create a new one?

~Nicole

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